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What Do You Think Of This Opening Paragraph For A Story I’m Writing?

It was almost dark. The last beams of light flickered over the sandy streets, lighting the way for the people bustling to and fro. A hot breeze blew, upsetting the sand and throwing it into the air in small clouds. Monkeys ran about, chattering to themselves, and stealing bits of food. Camels and elephants were scarce at this time of day, but still you could see them, tired and dusty, trotting through the streets with red velvet saddles and gold tassels, as Traders and the occasional King’s Man rode through the outskirts of the City. During the day it was swelteringly hot, and the ground was dried and cracked; any drop of water spilled would simply evaporate on the spot. The hot sun would glare down at them, and the sky was free of clouds. At night it would cool down, and Fable enjoyed that.
I’ll take any suggestions/advice! :)
Thanks!

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If You Live In Northern Ireland, You’ll Understand My Question?

why are we ripped off so badly when it comes to car insurance.
i don’t believe we claim any more or cost insurance companies more than other parts of the U.K.
i have relatives in England and Scotland and if i type in their postcode for a quote it is always several hundred pounds cheaper than where i live.
i firmly believe we are paying a premium for cheaper quotes for residents of the rest of the U.K.
all companies or brokers are part of a main insurer/bank based in the U.K.
if you work in the insurance industry i’d love to hear your reasons.

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If You Live In Northern Ireland, You’ll Understand My Question?

why are we ripped off so badly when it comes to car insurance.
i don’t believe we claim any more or cost insurance companies more than other parts of the U.K.
i have relatives in England and Scotland and if i type in their postcode for a quote it is always several hundred pounds cheaper than where i live.
i firmly believe we are paying a premium for cheaper quotes for residents of the rest of the U.K.
all companies or brokers are part of a main insurer/bank based in the U.K.
if you work in the insurance industry i’d love to hear your reasons.

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If You Live In Northern Ireland, You’ll Understand My Question?

why are we ripped off so badly when it comes to car insurance.
i don’t believe we claim any more or cost insurance companies more than other parts of the U.K.
i have relatives in England and Scotland and if i type in their postcode for a quote it is always several hundred pounds cheaper than where i live.
i firmly believe we are paying a premium for cheaper quotes for residents of the rest of the U.K.
all companies or brokers are part of a main insurer/bank based in the U.K.
if you work in the insurance industry i’d love to hear your reasons.

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If You Live In Northern Ireland, You’ll Understand My Question?

why are we ripped off so badly when it comes to car insurance.
i don’t believe we claim any more or cost insurance companies more than other parts of the U.K.
i have relatives in England and Scotland and if i type in their postcode for a quote it is always several hundred pounds cheaper than where i live.
i firmly believe we are paying a premium for cheaper quotes for residents of the rest of the U.K.
all companies or brokers are part of a main insurer/bank based in the U.K.
if you work in the insurance industry i’d love to hear your reasons.

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